Barry-the-SuperScot's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Steve Irwin: A Tribute]

A good tribute...

This is a good tribute to the great man. I was extremely saddened by his sudden death.

There is not much to say about the flash apart from there were decent photos of him and the music fit the mood well. We really should celebrate his life, brilliant personality and the love of animals he had that few people have nowadays. He was entertaining and educational to many. My thoughts are with his family.

It was expected that one day he could be killed by an animal, but people thought it would be a crocodile or a snake, but it was very surprising it was a stingray which has only killed like 3 people.
It was quite shocking to hear this when I woke up today. :(

Rest in Peace, Steve. You will be sorely missed and world is duller without you.

Frenzy responds:

Yeah, agreed.

Thanks for the good review.

[goku goes ssj for android]

As before, good but could improve.

As I said in the other review there is room for improvement.

Well once again, the graphics and animation were decent, the sound was synched perfectly with the animation and in this one the lines of the drawings seemed to be a bit cleaner and smoother than your other animation, it's done quite well. All in all the same problem as before is that this is too short, which lowers my overall score.
Hopefully you'll consider finishing this, I wouldn't mind seeing it finished. Saying that, I should also try and finish my own animation, it's taking me too long... :P

Again, good job, I hope to see more. If you want any tips or help just PM me again asking.
Well done!

coycoy responds:

iv'e been waiting for you to come review! this is one of the few reviews that are actually helpful! i'm trying to finish these 2 animations as soon as possible.the veggeto flash i made was made when i still knew little about flash, so it is a little rough around the edges...this goku one is the best flash iv'e done yet.i just need to finish it.thanks for your fair review! by the way.....i know you get asked this alot, but when is your vegeta goes ssj for the first time flash come out? i seen a preview of it a while back on some website(cant remember the name)it was cool.cant wait for it to come out!

["call me Super Vegito!"]

Not bad, but could be better...

Well, thanks for letting me know about your flashes and asking for a review, I'll do my best to give a fair and truthful review.

Graphically the flash was good. Decent drawings and animation and synched with the sound perfectly fine. The drawings were a bit rough around the edges though, lines could be cleaned up a bit, I'm guessing you used the pencil tool to draw them? If you did, then it's very well done since you drew with a mouse. I would suggest using the line tool and bending it, this is the way I would draw, gives you clean lines easier when drawing with a mouse.

Sound was of a decent quality being from the show, this is what put the filesize up, luckily it loaded for me straight away so it didn't slip out. As I've said very well synched, no problems there. I think for people with slow connections it might be a problem but I understand why you didn't include a preloader and that you'll include one in the finished version.

This was a decent remake, the only problem of course, is that it is short. But you alredy knew that. That's what lowered my overall score a bit as there is room for improvement. I look forward to see if you finish this, good job. Don't give up or let the bad reviewers put you down.
Keep it up!

coycoy responds:

im very mad! i had to erase this flash off my computer because it somehow became corrupted!so in other words,i have to start ALL over again.....but i guess it's a good thing it got erased. i know alot more about flash now and i could do alot better on it now! :) so i plan on re-making a.....uh...re-make!LOL! Dont be expecting it any time soon though.it will take me a while to make this all over again. i hope to improve alot!....after i finish these, i may make my own re-make of goku going ssj on namek. you never know!if i do i hope to see you for a review!

:)coycoy

[Goku vs Vegeta TLD]

AWESOME!

Awesome is not a word I use much here, but that was, in a word, awesome! Easily and by far the BEST DBZ sprite animation on Newgrounds, in fact, probably the BEST sprite animation on Newgrounds!

Graphics were fantastic, the 30fps made it super fast, smooth and with some amazing special effects and some seizure enducing scenes with the speed used. Brilliantly animated and special effects.
Decent voice acting and music used, everything worked well and was synched perfectly. Although the work "Ki" was pronounced wrong, it's pronounced "key" not "kai", but that's just a small niggle, nothing major. :P
It was ultra-violent and also funny with the comments you put in, excellent stuff. It didn't matter that Vegito split straight after beating Buu, it was a brilliant flash.

All in all, a brilliant, well-made flash which obviously had a lot of effort put into it.
Well done!

DuDuL responds:

Dude thx for such a long review... XD
I know that Vegetto cant unfuse when he want... but hey... its just a FAN FLASH MOVIE XD i can do everything
THX
Latta

[DBZ : P.O.T.U]

VERY GOOD! Deserves at LEAST a 3.80!

A VERY GOOD sprite animation! There haven't been many and yours is definately one of the best!

Graphics, although sprites and the fact that Goku was SSJ4 in this (I hate DBGT), they were animated superbly, lovely special effects and super fast fight sequences make this visually appealing!

The graphical style was sprites, but you managed to make the shots very good, even some psuedo-3d shots for camera movements ad well as cut-aways and focusing. Nice menu screen and stylish border.

Sound was decent. Sound effects, a little bit of music, synched well were clear and not a pain on the ears.

You captured the violence of the show perfectly in this, as well as the speed and moves. I'm impressed!

The humour was good, but a bit tasteless at times, there was 1 joke in particular that was really just uncalled for, but as for the rest, it was quite funny and gave me a few chuckles.

Overall, a great DBZ sprite movie and definately one of the best on Newgrounds. I urge others to look past the poor spelling (the creator is from The Netherlands) and the fact it's sprite based and rate it for the decent flash it is! You'll probably like it! I nominate this for inclusion on the DBZ crew!
Again, well done and I can see you will be a very good animator in future considering your age! Keep it up!

rebaz responds:

WASSUP,

YEAH, i hate Dbgt to, it freaking irritated me
OMFG, dude i'm glad you noticed that 3D effect or whatever you wanna call it... i worked 2 HOURS (non-stop) on that part...and ohwyeah my english is REAL messed up,

i'f readed some reply's you did on you're own movie..and woow man, you're smart :P ....

in one word : PWNZORZ

you rock ..

[CILLIT BANG]

Quite funny.

Aaaaah, Cillit Bang!
Almost as funny as the real adverts! lol

"Limescale, Rust, Ground-in dirt. They're a challenge for some cleaners but not CILLIT BANG!"
"Look what it did to this old penny, Good as new!"

Good stuff. Well done, quite funny and a good style. I liked it, I don't get why this is under a score of 3, just cause the Americans don't get it...

cribble responds:

i think we should all love it... even if you're German. Cheers.

[DBZFAN 7]

As always: Brilliant!

Well, I can say without doubt that this is the best DBZFAN yet and I was glad I managed to keep up with this series from almost the beginning!
First thing I noticed was that you had voices this time, which is a great bonus!
And it was also good to see Chris finally "ascending" to his blue haired version that you showed to us in the DBZ crew ages ago!
The music fit the mood and action perfectly.
I remember you recently said in the DBZ crew that this is not your last episode? So does that mean Rob wasn't killed by that final blast there?
If not, I yet again look forward to the next installment!
Great job!

djchrispy responds:

WHERE THE HELL IS VEGETA SSJ lol. Thats becoming a catch phrase around here barry. OK, i made through with 5 years of my time for ya. Now make through with a couple months and give me VEGETA DAMMIT.
Thanks for being one of the dudes that kept me motivated through this.

[Overprotective Part Two]

It's about bloody time!

Well, it's been a looooooooong time coming and it's finally here.
I remember reviewing the preview for part 2 aaaaages ago.

Anyway...
Great graphics and animation, done very well and flowed well, good use of motion and focus blur too.
The voices were very nicely done and the music fitted with the action, nice sound effects.
Quite violent, especially when that boy got his face smashed into the wall repeatedly.
There was a lot of background information on the series too which will be good for those who haven't seen Part 1.

I have one small problem though, it was a tad short, considering how long you worked on it, but it's not too major, I look forward to Part 3, just try and get it done quicker if you can, eh? ;)
Then again, I should talk! I've been working on my next flash (on and off) for over 2 years! lol.

Anyway, good job, hope to see the next part soon!

Sikes responds:

I wish I could say I've been working on this for 2 solid years, but it's been more like 3 or 4 months, occasionally. The next one will get more attention and I expect it will be longer and even better than this one. I used and twice in a sentence, that's bad grammar right?

[Ketsu-Jin saga part 1]

Not bad

Good work, Ryan.
Not pure stick but a good alternative to it.

Nice graphics and animation, nice shading on the characters.
Sounds fit well and everything. We know you're good enough anyway... ;)

Anyway, good job on this, you should get a pass no problem.

Majin-Ryan responds:

hehe thanks barry =)